Tuesday, March 20, 2007

I am a little behind on my writing for project 3. I would like to be a little bit more descriptive in my text. For example, I go into great detail about my room but as I was taking pictures of my room yesterday for my website, I realized I left a lot of things out. I also want to be more reflective. This is my last semester at WVU and I have been living in the same room for three years. I would love to reflect back and think about different things that happend to me in that room. I also think that I could be more narrative in my writing. For instance, In my webpage I talk about my picture frames in my room. I think it would be a good idea to identify specifically one or two pictures and then tell the story behind those pictures. I also need to add some pages. I definately want to create a link that connects my room with the "How to do Laundry" page my group and I created. This will be easy to do because in my "Room" page I talk about my laundry basket. I think that if I expand a little bit in my writing and talk about how I like doing laundry then I can create a link with the word "Laundry" to the "How to do Laundry" page.

1 comment:

jgavette said...

I think the text is great. It appears that there are pictures, but they are not working. You will need to add a google search engine and del.ci.ous thing. Some pictures and colors and it will be great.